Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Mundane life

Undercurrents.
Drifting away.
Caught in a web
or just floating.

Cluttered table.
Random thoughts.
yet blank - like a black board
written and erased.

Unsettling and fidgety.
Dim light of a zero watt bulb.
Dawn.
School buses and traffic lights.
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7 comments:

  1. deepuJanuary 19, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    Nice poem...hard to find links..just like that :)

    First line, currents, i read it as garments...but got a good meaning as well

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  2. JanViJanuary 19, 2011 at 9:32 PM

    Fantastic. And this is your 'kissing the Wall of Fame goodbye' moment.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    @deepu, you have a great perception ;)

    @janvi,
    nice elucidation for a thoughtful mind ;).

    ~Praveen

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  4. JanViJanuary 20, 2011 at 1:21 PM

    @Praveen - What is elucidation?! :)

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  5. JanViJanuary 20, 2011 at 1:24 PM

    Ok. I just looked it up - the act of explaining; making something plain or intelligible. Wow. Guess what my next post title is going to be...

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  6. I,me,myselfJanuary 21, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    Looks like the title is finalised ,but, where is the post :D

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  7. JanViJanuary 21, 2011 at 12:39 PM

    :( Hard realities of life...

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